Overall it's pretty good. Some blinking would be great, maybe even at this quality necessary. Other thing that's off is the image quality. Not sure if it's something you can fix, but something to look into for next time if it is fixable.

It was alright, you're headed in some kind of right direction... the camera angles for the first half and some throughout were really well executed. The animation for the characters were too stiff, try animating the spine more... Cheers!

Lovely~
Where can I buy this so called "Shirt"? And will it even be in my size...